Contents Page
With the article headings having different styled fonts and sizes and all feature articles having the page numbers in different styles and positions. Having removed the 3rd image located on the left hand corner/side, to create more space and have the 'Free Downloads' as a less important main feature article. I decided to create the box with 'Plus' information inside, because they are the least important articles and it enables me to make the main features stand out more. I decided to make the image of 'Eleanor Gold' bigger, because I realised that the images were the same size throughout and therefore the main article doesn't stand out as much, along with the size of the article's text.
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Feedback
The feedback that I received for my contents page I may need to reconsider the page numbers for the main feature article and the effect that it has on the reader, because by having it located right at the beginning of the magazine, it won't draw the readers in for the whole magazine. Therefore I needed to reconsider how far I wanted to draw them into my magazine and therefore I changed the numbers from 2-3 to 9-10, because I feel that if I was after 10, the readers may lose interest in the magazine, as they will have to wait till the end to read the interview. Also another piece of feedback was that the text was too small under the titles of each page, and that I may want to reconsider the more important articles and there positioning. Therefore I chose to make the text a font size bigger and chose which articles are more important so they can be located at the top of the page and then I created a separate 'Plus' box towards the bottom. Also to rephrase some of the tag lines or titles. The image located in the bottom right hand corner of Ellie Goulding, the original artist, which I changed to "Eleanor Gold", is my own original image which was took at a live concert back in October at Hammersmith Apollo. Along with the top image being in a star shape, that is again my own original image which was took at the same concert back in September 2013 at Wembley Arena.
Analysis
After one of my peers and my teacher assessing my contents page, I decided to make the font slightly bigger, including the sub-headings and text placed underneath, this is because I felt that it was too small for the readers and would therefore potentially put them off continuing to read my magazine.
The feedback that I received for my contents page I may need to reconsider the page numbers for the main feature article and the effect that it has on the reader, because by having it located right at the beginning of the magazine, it won't draw the readers in for the whole magazine. Therefore I needed to reconsider how far I wanted to draw them into my magazine and therefore I changed the numbers from 2-3 to 9-10, because I feel that if I was after 10, the readers may lose interest in the magazine, as they will have to wait till the end to read the interview. Also another piece of feedback was that the text was too small under the titles of each page, and that I may want to reconsider the more important articles and there positioning. Therefore I chose to make the text a font size bigger and chose which articles are more important so they can be located at the top of the page and then I created a separate 'Plus' box towards the bottom. Also to rephrase some of the tag lines or titles. The image located in the bottom right hand corner of Ellie Goulding, the original artist, which I changed to "Eleanor Gold", is my own original image which was took at a live concert back in October at Hammersmith Apollo. Along with the top image being in a star shape, that is again my own original image which was took at the same concert back in September 2013 at Wembley Arena.
Analysis
After one of my peers and my teacher assessing my contents page, I decided to make the font slightly bigger, including the sub-headings and text placed underneath, this is because I felt that it was too small for the readers and would therefore potentially put them off continuing to read my magazine.